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Sep 17 2012, 08:58 PM Post #1 |
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Introduction A while ago,on DBZ Discussions section,i sent a post stating the reasons why i believe that Frieza Saga looks to me like the natural end of DBZ.One of those reasons was that such an ending would have great potential for a sequel.So,i decided to create a DBZ sequel which starts at the end of Frieza Saga,considering that DBZ ended there,with Piccolo killed by Frieza,Goku killed in Namek's explosion and Gohan being the only Z fighter left alive. I also decided to call it Dragonball A,to imply it's a new beginning.From my next post on,i'll be posting here the episodes of the "series",which is planned to be developped into three sagas.Of course,during the proccess,i may come up with more ideas,so,maybe there'll be more than three sagas. |
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| dangerousbob | Sep 17 2012, 09:21 PM Post #2 |
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So like what now? Your writing a new story? Couldn't you just set it in the down time between Sagas like the movies do. |
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Sep 18 2012, 06:47 AM Post #3 |
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Episode 1:A new era It's been a few days since Gohan has returned to Earth.Both he and his mother have quickly got over Goku's death and moved on with their lives.Our story begins a lovely afternoon. Chichi:Where are you going,Gohan? Gohan:I finished my homework and,now,i'm going to train. Chichi:WHAT?Haven't we agreed that you'll be devoted to your studies from now on? Gohan:Yes,but this doesn't mean that i'll quit my training regimen. Chichi:Please,son,forget fighting. Gohan:Mom,after all those i've gone through during the last year of my life,this has become a way of life for me.My father died to protect the ones he loved.I can't fail him.Besides,Piccolo taught me the warrior's pride.I can't help seeking further strength. Chichi:And what about me,Gohan?I've suffered so much,as a wife and as a mother.I watched my husband almost being killed by a green monster. At some moments,i thought i had lost even you.Do you want me to be unhappy for the rest of my life? Gohan:I'm sorry if you feel like that,but i won't become a slacker.And don't talk like that about Piccolo ever again.He was my master and friend. Gohan leaves. Chichi(thinking):Oh,i wish he'd never joined the adults at those things.Now,it's obviously too late to make him like he was before.Goku,Piccolo...i hate you. Gohan's intense training in the desert is interrupted by a telepathetic message he receives from Mr.Popo. Mr.Popo:Gohan,come to the Sky Palace.I've got something to tell you. A few moments later,Gohan is there. Mr.Popo:You know that Kami is dead.I wonder if you'd like to take his place.You and your mother would be a perfect god and goddess respectively. Gohan tells his mom the news and she gets excited.When the previous,and now dead,Kami himself asked the same thing from Goku,years ago,she urged Goku to accept and she was disappointed that he didn't. And so,a new life started for Gohan and Chichi.They would live in a palace as gods,having anything they desired.Of course,Gohan would go to school,like any ordinary kid.What awaits them is yet to come in the following episodes. Edited by no name, Sep 18 2012, 06:49 AM.
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Sep 20 2012, 07:07 AM Post #4 |
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Episode 2:Gohan finds an ally Mother and son lived happily for a while.Gohan attended the first class of primary school and everything was very interesting there.Well,everything except the boys from older classes that bullied him.But,Gohan never even thought of using his powers against them.Anyway,summer has come and lessons are over. Chichi:Gohan,Roshi called.He wants you to go to his place.He told me he has something important to tell you. In case you haven't guessed yet,Chichi has filled the palace with all sorts of modern comforts,including telephone. Chichi:Please,don't stay too long there.I don't want you to get badly affected by that old perv. Gohan didn't understand what Chichi meant by that.He nodded anyway and left. Gohan lands on the island. Gohan:Hey,old timer.Long time no see. Roshi:It's because i've been training the next generation. Gohan:Huh? Roshi:As you know,among the ordinary earthlings,there are very few gifted ones that can develop super powers,like Kuririn,Yamcha and Tien.Since their deaths,i've been searching for the next generation of fighters with great potential.We have to make a new Z team,for the Earth's safety, especially now that dragonballs will no longer be here to make our lives easier. Gohan:So,you've made some great discovery? Roshi:Sort of.He'll be here in a few seconds. Gohan:You're...you're right! I can feel a big chi approaching. A lad lands.He has black hair(the same shape as the hair of Trunks).He wears the turtle gi. Lad:You must be Gohan.Master Roshi has told me about you.I'm Choco. Gohan:Really?Then,why are you white skinned? Choco:Any problem with that? Roshi:Today,the advanced part of your training begins,Choco.You're going to have training sessions with Gohan. Gohan:Cool.I'm very happy to have found such a great sparring partner.We'll spend the whole summer here practicing our skills. Three months later... Gohan:I had a great time here with you guys.But,i have to go home now.School starts in a few days.And i'm pretty sure my mother will be mad at me by now.I was supposed to visit you for just a few minutes,but i spent my holidays on this island instead. Choco:I'll miss you Gohan. Gohan:Hey,i've got an idea.Do you want to come see my house? Choco:Your house,lol.You live in a floating palace and you're the god of Earth.But,why not?I'm coming. The two fighters take off and Roshi waves farewell. Gohan and Choco are flying at a relaxed pace,when they sense something. Gohan:Choco...have you noticed? Choco:Of course.You're not the only one who can sense energy. Gohan:Several big chis are at Sky Palace.And they're not good chis.AND MY MOM IS THERE. Gohan starts flying at full speed.Choco tries to follow. Choco:Gohan,wait.I can't keep up with your speed. What happens at Sky Palace?Find out in the next episode of Dragonball A. |
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| Hadoumeha32 | Sep 20 2012, 07:30 PM Post #5 |
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It's good, but just one positive criticism, if that's alright. You should try to use quotation marks more. I do like the idea, however, and can see that school of thought being justified, either at the end of the Frieza or Cell Saga. Good on ya, mate. |
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Sep 21 2012, 09:07 PM Post #6 |
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Episode 3:The Monster of Fire A yellow barrier surrounds the Sky Place.Kintoun floats,with Chichi on it.Her hands are full of shopping bags.Gohan and Choco arrive. Chichi:Ohh,Gohan! You remembered to come back! But,i'll punish you for that later.As if what i went through in my shopping wasn't enough,now this annoying thing won't let me enter my own house. Choco:Let's get rid of it.KAMEHAMEHA The blast hits the barrier,but it remains undamaged. Choco:No,you're kidding.That was my full power. Gohan:Let me try it. Gohan pulls back his arms,ready to perform the technique he was taught by Roshi during summer. Gohan:KAMEHAMEHA. The blast penetrates the barrier,which is demolished.Gohan turns to Chichi. Gohan:Mom,i'd be more relaxed if you went somewhere else for the time being.I hope you understand. Chichi nods.Kintoun flies down towards Earth. Chichi:Be careful son. Choco:Wow,great advice. The two fighters land on the platform.They notice a black,fat snake with yellow eyes.It's about three metres long.It is one of the chis sources. Monster:Greetings.I'm the Monster of Fire. Gohan:This is my house,you know.Who do you and your friends think you are,coming here and taking it over just like that? Monster:Boy,we're not here to talk,but to fight. Gohan:BASTARD. Gohan attacks the monster.A punch of his sends it miles away from the platform. Choco:That's the spirit,Gohan.We'll kick his butt. Gohan:No.I can handle him alone. The monster returns.It creates three more duplicates of itself.The four monsters surround Gohan. Monster:Think you're hot?Then,how's that? All four of them breath fire.Gohan gets lost from vision in flames. Choco:GOHAN,NO. A hole opens among the flames.A barrier can be seen,with Gohan in the middle. Gohan:Choco,go in the palace to investigate. Choco hesitates.Gohan struggles to keep the barrier active. Gohan:Hurry up,so that i can concentrate on my fight. Choco runs in the palace.What is he going to find there?Wait till next episode of Dragonball A. |
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Sep 22 2012, 08:17 PM Post #7 |
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Episode 4:The Monster of Lightning In the palace's hall,Choco meets a yellow snake with red eyes,the same size as the previous one. Monster:I'm the Monster of Lightning.Have you written your will? Choco:Look,i don't think it's a good idea to fight here. Monster:Don't worry,this palace is sealed by magic.Our attacks cannot destroy it,no matter how strong they are. Choco smiles and takes a fighting posture. Choco:Then,you're the one who should be worried. Monster:Come at me with all you have. Choco:No need to ask. Choco attacks the creature.But,as soon as he punches it,he's paralyzed. Monster:Oh,yeah,i forgot to tell you about that.My body is flowed by electricity so powerful it can paralyze even fighters with super powers. The monster widely opens its mouth and starts forming an energy sphere.Choco feels terror,but cannot react.The ball hits him.He's damaged,but the hit rids him of the paralysis.The monster rushes to him.Choco jumps back and fires a ball. Choco:I won't fall for that twice.I'll fight you with chi attacks. The monster dodges.Choco floats and starts firing a barrage of chi balls.The snake dodges all of them with super speed.Choco fires a kamehameha. The monster dodges,but the wave follows. Choco:This,you can't dodge just like that.Wherever you go,it goes. The snake turns and fires a blast.The two blasts collide,resulting in an explosion,a few seconds later.The snake teleports behind Choco and hits him with its tail,thus,paralyzing him.He falls on the floor.The monster floats above him and starts forming a really huge ball. Monster:No more escaping chances.This attack has enough power to kill you. The monster fires.No sight of Choco after the explosion.The monster smiles.Then,a yelling is heard from behind. Choco:HAAA... The kamehameha attack destroys the foe.Choco smiles. Choco(thinking):Hah! He was totally tricked by the improved version of Shadow Illusion technique,with fake sense of contact and moving image.But who can blame him? Choco runs towards the inner parts of the palace.More action awaits in the next episodes of Dragonball A. Edited by no name, Sep 22 2012, 10:05 PM.
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Sep 23 2012, 09:13 PM Post #8 |
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Episode 5:The Monster of Water Choco enters another room.A red snake with blue eyes,the same size as the other ones,appears. Monster:I'm the Monster of Water.This is as far as you go. The monster uses magic to make a huge cube of water appear out of nowhere.The cube surrounds Choco.Full of panic,the fighter runs to breath,but the water moves with him.He's drowned. Monster:Wherever you go,it goes.You're doomed to die of asphyxation. About five minutes later,Choco falls on the floor.The monster keeps the cube active for five more minutes,to make sure he's dead. Outside of the palace,Gohan has much trouble fighting the quadrapled Monster of Fire.He falls on his knees exhausted.The four snakes surrounding him laugh like devils.Suddenly,he realizes that Choco's chi has faded.His friend is dead! Gohan becomes mad.To his foes' surprise,he jumps and extends his limbs. Gohan:QUADRAPLE MASSENKO. Gohan fires four massenko beams,one from each of his limbs,destroying all four monsters at once.Then,he runs in the palace. Meanwhile,the Monster of Water,floats above Choco's corpse,ready to annihilate it with a beam. Choco(thinking):Ok,the plan goes well up to now.Due to the technique that Master Roshi taught me,i can endure underwater for hours.I supressed my chi to zero,to feign death.But,now,i have to find a way to exploit my advantage...Ok,i'll try my Dragon Fist. To the monster's surprise,Choco jumps towards it,with energy flowing through his hand. Choco:GOTTA PENETRATE. The monster is cut into two and drops dead.Choco continues exploring the palace,until he arrives at the main hall.Behind a curtain,he can see the shadow of a figure.Can it be...Piccolo? |
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Sep 24 2012, 01:58 PM Post #9 |
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Episode 6:The Boss of the Dungeon The figure comes out of the curtain.It's not Piccolo.It's another Namek warrior.It looks more like the Nameless Namek(Piccolo and Kami before splitting). Namek:So,you defeated all the monsters i spawned.I must admit i hadn't expected that. Choco:What are you? Namek:You can call me Triccolo.I'm Piccolo's son. Choco:This can't be.Piccolo doesn't have a son. Triccolo:Oh,yes he does.Just before going to 23rd Tenkaichi to fight Goku,he spawned a special kind of egg,in case he lost.It would take some years for that egg to hatch,but what would come out would be many,many,many times stronger than any Namek warrior that has ever existed.Now,this palace is mine.And,with me as the new God of Earth,an age of terror and darkness shall begin. Choco:I don't get it.Why didn't Piccolo ever talk about that to anyone? Triccolo:It seems that,during his fight with Goku at Tenkaichi,he was so badly beaten that he got partly amnesia.So,no one knew about my existence until today.Now,the whole world shall learn! Choco:No,you won't harm anyone. Triccolo:Oh,yeah?And,who's going to stop me,bug? Choco:Me... He attacks.Triccolo finger flicks him.Choco crashes against the wall.He stays down. Gohan runs towards the main hall. Gohan(thinking):Choco's chi has returned.I'm glad he isn't dead after all.But,i'm in the dark about everything.What's going on here? Gohan finally enters the room.He sees Choco on the floor,with some wounds on him.Then,in the center of the room,someone very familiar!When Triccolo sees Gohan,he feels a strange warmth in his heart.The Namek and the boy look at each other,for several moments,without talking. Triccolo:Come closer kid.We have so much to say. They discuss for a really long time.Maybe even an hour.Finally,Choco regains his strengths and gets up. Choco:Hey,what's going on in here? Gohan:Hey,Choco.Have you met Triccolo? Choco:Are you nuts?I could have been killed. Gohan:Well,get over it! Gohan laughs and Choco is dumbfounded.And this is the end of Triccolo Saga.Two more ones(at least) await. |
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Sep 25 2012, 09:25 PM Post #10 |
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Episode 7:The Hell of West City It's been six years since the legendary fights on Namek.Gohan is in the last grade of primary school.But,we haven't seen Bulma at all,since she and Gohan returned from that planet.Let's pay her a visit... Bulma still lives in West City and continues her rigorous researches on various things.However,she doesn't do as well in her personal life as she does in her profession.She's had a series of failed relationships during these last six years and she's really disappointed.She wonders whether Yamcha was her one and only true love after all.Even though he wasn't always what we call a faithful mate. One evening,Bulma sits in her lab,tired from work.Once more,she catches herself missing Yamcha. Bulma(thinking):I hadn't realized how important he was for me,when he was alive.If only i could turn time backwards.I would accept him as he was.I would accept his cheating ways,without complaining. Bulma swears to herself to never say those things to anyone.They would ruin her reputation as a dynamic woman.Besides,such thoughts are only moments of weakness,caused by loneliness.Bulma's thoughts are interrupted by an alarm.The screen of the threat detector,on the lab's panel,turns on and off.The threat detector is an invention of hers.As its name says,it detects anything that threatens West City. Bulma:Gosh.I have to warn the citizens.We must all run to the shelter. A few hours later,the city has been abandoned by everyone.Just in time! A floating metal building that has appeared out of nowhere lands on the city. It's size is so big,that it covers almost the whole extent,shattering the buildings. Inside that gigantic thing,in a dark room,a screen is automatically turned on.The shade of a smartly dressed man is shown on the screen. Shade:Where the hell are the residents?They were supposed to be here,so that we could absorb their energy.Could someone have warned them? But,there is no way that anyone could know about our plan... Silence... Shade:Well,we can do without the human weaklings.Soon,the strongest fighters will be here.Their energy will be more than enough.Har,har... Next day... Gohan flies to school,with his sack on his back.When he arrives at West City,he's shocked.He immediately throws off his sack. Gohan(thinking):I must call Choco and Triccolo here,now. He uses telepathy to contact them(Triccolo taught him that).Soon,they're there. Gohan:Hey guys.While waiting for you,i went to Korin's and took the last two senzus he had left. Triccolo:Give them to me.I'll be the one to keep them. Choco:You'll be the one to keep them?Why? Triccolo:BECAUSE! Gohan,who trusts Triccolo,gives him the senzus.Then,the three fighters enter the building(strangely,it has a door,as if someone wants them to enter). As soon as they're in,the door closes.A few minutes later,a tank appears.Bulma drives it. Bulma:Ok,that special beam i invented can penetrate any material in existence,no matter how hard it is. The tank's cannon fires the metal tower.To Bulma's surprise,nothing happens.Bulma gets angry and continues shooting.But,what has happened to the three Z Fighters?Find out in the next episodes of Dragonball A. Edited by no name, Sep 25 2012, 09:29 PM.
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Sep 27 2012, 08:55 PM Post #11 |
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Episode 8:Choco vs Small Giant When the gang entered the metal thing,the door closed.The empty metal room was illuminated by electric light coming out of nowhere(since there were no lamps).A voice,also coming out of nowhere,was heard. Voice:I've been expecting you,my friends. Choco:Hey,this voice sounds familiar to me. Triccolo:Not to me,though. Gohan:Not to me,neither. Voice:Don't bother trying to escape.The walls,floor and ceiling are equipped with a special,energy absorbing shield.It will absorb the energy of every hit or chi blast.But,we're going to take your energy anyway. Triccolo:Oh,really?And how are you going to do that? Voice:By facing you in one on one fights.Any damage you take by your personal opponents shall be absorbed. Three holes open in random parts of the walls and strong air currents are blown towards them.Before the heroes can react,they're sucked in the holes,which immediately close.Each one of the fighters now finds himself in a different room. When Choco can finally stand back on his feet,he sees a giant,muscular,bold,metalic man on the other side of the room.He's dressed in a pink jacket. Man:Greetings.I'm Small Giant.Beat me and a door opens to the main hall.Lose to me and...die! Choco:Then,i'll beat you. Choco launches himself to the foe.He tries a punch,which is blocked by S.Giant's arm. S.Giant:Is this supposed to be a punch? S.Giant elbows Choco's stomach,thus,immobilizing him by pain.He keeps going,pushing Choco with the elbow,until the human fighter hits against the wall.The android pushes his elbow deeper in Choco's muscles,making him scream.But,then...Choco smiles! Choco:Allow me to introduce you one of my new techniques. Choco fires two laser beams from his eyes.S.Giant is hit and his back is forced on the floor.Two seconds later,the two fighters,once more,stand opposed to each other. S.Giant:You think you stand a chance against me,worm? S.Giant starts powering up with a kiai.His voice creates an energy whirlpool.Choco finds himself spinning in the air,while several parts of his body are being scratched.Finally,S.Giant stops and Choco falls on the floor,full of injuries.He slowly stands up. Choco(thinking):Gosh,he's stronger than me.I have to find a way around,otherwise i'm dead meat. He pulls back his arms,charging a kamehameha. S.Giant:A beam struggle,huh?I accept your challenge. Choco fires the kamehameha.S.Giant fires a blast from his one hand.To his surprise,the blast keeps going,as if Choco and his kamehameha weren't there,until it hits the wall,thus,being absorbed by the shield.A voice is heard behind the giant android. Choco:HAAA... Choco's blast penetrates S.Giant's body and he falls on the floor,with a huge hole in his stomach. Choco:Hah.How easily everyone is tricked by that Shadow Illusion technique of mine. S.Giant stands up and turns to his foe! Choco:MAN! Gimme a break... Choco leaps far from the terrifying enemy.S.Giant angrily walks towards him.Choco raises his arm and forms an energy disc. Choco:KIENZAN. He throws the destructo disc.S.Giant catches it with his two fingers(thumb and index) and shatters it,simply by pressing it! He reaches the petrified human and,with his foot,forces his belly on the floor.He presses the fallen foe's head,making him scream.However,the fragments of the earlier kienzan are still floating,without him having noticed.Choco,who now has his face pressed against the floor,smiles.With the power of his thought,he commands the energy fragments to reconstruct.The reformed destructo disc is launched towards S.Giant from behind and cuts off his head.The enormous body falls on the floor,this time for good.The winner stands up and raises his index fingers. Choco(smiling):Thank Kami. Silence... Choco:Oh,wait.Gohan is the god.So,i should say "thank Gohan". A door opens.So,Choco won his battle.But,will Triccolo and Gohan be able to do the same?Find out next time,on Dragonball A. |
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Sep 28 2012, 09:00 PM Post #12 |
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Episode 9:Triccolo vs Fuchsia In the main hall,the shade on the screen smiles. Shade:Looks like,outside,a stupid humanling is trying to enter,using some sort of machinery to penetrate our defense.Little does he know that,this way,he's actually helping us,providing us with more energy.Har,har... Triccolo and his foe stand opposed to each other,in their fighting postures.The foe is a man with blue hair and dressed in a military,green uniform. Triccolo:So,who are you supposed to be? Man:I'm Soldier Fuchsia,one of the new members of the reborn Red Ribbon Army. Fuchsia is surrounded by a purple aura as he powers up. Triccolo:You're strong for a human,but no match for a Namek. Triccolo disappears and reappears standing on his hand,right in front of the foe.He sweeps Fuchsia's feet,with his own ones.Before he can fall, Triccolo kicks him in the head,sending him to hit against the ceiling.Once more,before the foe can touch the floor,the Namek jumps and knees him at stomach.Triccolo steps on the floor.The moment the falling enemy is right above him,he punches him,sending him to hit against the wall.After all that, Fuchsia finally touches the floor again.He stands up,missing a few teeth.He doesn't look worried,though! Triccolo:Why don't you go and tell your boss to come here?I have plenty of beating for him,as well. Fuchsia's eyes become red.Triccolo feels paralyzed. Triccolo:Why...can't i...move? Fuchsia:Har,har.It's called psychic power,you fool. Now relaxed,Fuchsia walks towards Triccolo.He yells,powering up,and the purple aura surrounds him again.With great effort,he cuts off Triccolo's head.The Namek's body falls down and Fuchsia squashes the head in his hand.A door opens. Fuchsia:Mission accomplished.Time to go inform the leader. He turns to go away.But,behind him,a new head is generated on Triccolo's body! He stands up,attacks from behind and,catching the foe off guard,he penetrates his body,with his arm. Triccolo:You fool.My regenerating abilities are far more advanced than those of my father. Fuchsia fires a blast on a wall,which,of course,remains unscratched. Triccolo:Now,what was that for? Fuchsia gets a very serious expression. Fuchsia:Well,i can't be a DB character and die without having fired,at least,one blast. Triccolo:Oh,i understand.You're right. Fuchsia drops dead.It looks like the forces of evil are losing ground.Stay tuned on Dragonball A. |
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Sep 29 2012, 06:26 PM Post #13 |
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Episode 10:Gohan vs ???? Gohan looks at the enemy in front of him.He has a robot head and a human body.He wears a pink outfit. Man:I've been waiting for so long to have my revenge on your father,who did this to me.But,then,that jerk went and died.So,i'll have my revenge on you,instead.I'm Taopai,the world's greatest assasin. Gohan:I've heard about you from my dad. Taopai:After my humiliation at 23rd Tenkaichi,i was hired once more by the RR.Their scientists promised to give me more power than i'd ever imagined.They modified my circuits,making me stronger than ever.LET'S FIGHT. The two fighters' fists collide.At that moment,the cyborg's mechanic arm changes into a blade,surprising Gohan.Taopai exploits the kid's momentary shock,thus,leaving him with one eye.Gohan steps back,screaming in pain,with a river of blood running from his empty eyehole.Taopai goes for his other eye too,but Gohan puts himself together fast and counterattacks with a punch,launching the foe away.He launches himself towards the android and starts repeatedly punching him at stomach.Taopai coughs a liquid which is unsure whether it was blood or machine oil.After several Gohan's punches,he manages to react and fires two laser beams from his eyes.The lasers hit Gohan,knocking him away.Gohan stands up and sees Taopai coming to him,with a flying kick.With extreme speed,Gohan ducks,so Taopai ends up hitting against the wall.The two opponents turn to each other again.Gohan pulls back his arms.Taopai's blade changes into a high tech launching gun. Taopai:Har,har,i've prepared an even more improved version of Dodonpa. Gohan:KAMEHAMEHA. Taopai:HYPER DODONPA. The beams collide.Little by little,Gohan is losing ground.Finally,dodonpa has almost copletely overlapped kamehameha. Taopai:Get ready,brat.You're going to meet your @#* old man in hell. Those words make Gohan feel extreme rage,which releases his hidden power. Gohan:Old man?Did you call my father AN OLD MAN? Gohan's kamehameha wins the beam struggle and Taopai is obliterated.Don't miss the next exciting episode of Dragonball A. |
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Oct 3 2012, 06:31 AM Post #14 |
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Episode 11:Enemy revealed Three doors to the main hall open and the three Z fighters all enter it at the same time.At the center of the hall is a robot,three metres tall,which resembles Machine King monster from Yugioh cards.On the top of its head,it has a glass dome,with a brain in it.The robot is connected to cords that come from the walls around.Right above the robot's head is a screen,with a black,bold,smartly dressed man on it. Man:Congratulations,warriors.You all had excellent performances. Choco gets shocked when he looks at the screen. Choco:Hey,i know you.You're Officer Black,from that criminal organization that attacked my village when i was a kid.Show yourself,coward. Black laughs evily. Black:Myself is the robot in front of you.What you see on the screen is just a digital image.And that's all thanks to that brat's father. He shows Gohan. Gohan:Dad has told me about you.You were a bunch of creeps that could do anything to fill their pockets with gold.But,in the end,justice prevailed and he broke you down. Black:That's what he thought.I tried to escape,intending to resurrect the glorious Red Ribbon Army,but that bastard old man of yours attacked me. Then,believing he had killed me,he left.And the truth is that i was left in a terrible condition,indeed.I was almost dead.The RR's scientists tried their best,but they didn't manage to save my body.They managed to keep me alive,though,by transfering my mind to that robot you see.When enough energy is absorbed,the new mechanical body of mine will gain immense power.And,then,i will rule the world as the unstoppable leader of the reborn RED RIBBON ARMY.HA,HA,HA,HA. Triccolo:So,that's why you wanted our energy... Black:Bingo.You won the first prize.And,as i said,i'm going to take your life force,no matter what. A hole opens in the ceiling and sleeping gas comes out.The Z fighters fall unconscious.The cords are unplugged off the walls,catch and lift the warriors.Black immediately feels delicious energy flowing through his robo-body. Black:Ahhh,what a bliss.When i drain the last drop of their vital energy,i will,at last,be able to move.Soon,those fools will be just useless corpses and nothing will be able to stop me anymore.MHA,HA,HA,HA... Everything seems lost.No one can save the day now.So,is that the end of the heroes?If you want to find out,you mustn't miss...well,you know what you mustn't miss. |
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Oct 4 2012, 05:50 AM Post #15 |
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Episode 12:Fighting an army with an army Black is surprised to see Triccolo opening his eyes and cutting off his cord. Triccolo:Har,har,i'm not asleep,i was just kidding. Black is speechless. Triccolo:Caught you totally by surprise,eh? Black:Can't be! Triccolo:Of course it can be,you fool.The organism of a Namek is very different from a human organism.Sleeping dust doesn't affect me. Black:I've had enough with you. A gate opens and a great number of robots comes out.They all attack Triccolo,at the same time.He repels them with a kiai.Then,he floats and prepares a big chi blast to annihilate them.However,one of them vanishes and appears behind him.He hits him,sending him on the floor.Another one kicks him,sending him to hit against the wall.Immediately,a team of three robots shoot him,at the same time.Triccolo does a tornado like attack to repel most of the annoying crowd,but he knows he won't be able to continue like that for long. Triccolo:All right.Fire shall be fought with fire. He opens his mouth and launches a large number of eggs.The eggs immediately hatch and monsters come out of them. Triccolo:Go,my children.Prevail. Triccolo's army easily destroys all the robots.Then,the monsters selfdestruct by exploding. Triccolo:Next target,you! Black:No,stay back.NOOO... Triccolo cuts off Gohan's and Choco's cords and lays his two allies on the floor.He gives them the two senzus he had and they regain consciousness. Also,Gohan gets back his missing eye.The three of them now glare at the giant robot. Black:Har,har.It's too late,fools.I've already absorbed enough energy to come at full power.Now,at last,i can move.I don't need the absorbing shield anymore. The energy absorbing shield covering the walls is deactivated.Almost at the same moment,Bulma's tank penetrates the walls and enters. Gohan:BULMA.You couldn't have chosen a worse moment to show up. With his new,metal body,Black starts moving.He walks towards his foes.Triccolo flies swiftly towards him,but Black catches him with both arms. Triccolo yells in pain.Black throws him high and fires a chi blast that annihilates him.Gohan cries. Gohan:TRICCOLO. Choco:He took him out,just like that! We're doomed. Despite his crying,Gohan is prepared to fight. Gohan:Choco,listen.If we fight together,we'll still be no match for that thing.I don't want to be rude,but i'm the only one who has a chance of beating it. Give me your energy,take Bulma and leave. Choco:Bulma?Oh,you mean that woman in the tank. Choco gives Gohan most of his energy,keeping a little for himself,so that he can fly.Then,he lifts Bulma. Bulma:Eeek... Choco:It's for your own good,madam. Choco leaves.Gohan and Black look at each other.The final battle of the saga is about to begin.Don't miss the next,action packed episode of Dragonball A. |
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